Today we are working on editing FW#1. First, take a look at the rubric points for a 2 and a 3.
2- Presentation of ideas lacks structure, affecting the reader’s understanding. May include an inadequate introduction that offers a weak thesis. Body paragraphs tend towards listing, with little support. Conclusion does not restate main points.
3- Presentation of ideas is mostly structured, including an adequate introduction that offers a thesis, body paragraphs, occasional transitions, mostly coherent/consistent flow throughout, and ends with a conclusion.
In general, the papers scoring below a 3 needed more detail and explanation.