Monday 24 October- English 9

23 Oct

Today we will focus on revisions to the Fiction Skills essay.

Pds 2&5- Focus on revising for smoothness. Some of these read very choppy and needed better transitions. Also, I wrote down my Top 5 most common errors, which are below.
1. It’s “versus” not vs. Write out that word.
2. Title format- Of Mice and Men
3. Capital letters!
4. No 1st (me, my, we, I) or 2nd person (you,  your)
5. “I feel” or “I think” makes your paper sound weak.


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Posted by on October 23, 2016 in Informational Writing- PS#4



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